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Post by Laila on May 2, 2010 0:32:29 GMT -4
Good go with your idea you sent me, then ill take over next chapter but could you send me more info on vale's voice inside i would like to know more about that dark side...im still a little bit confused with it... if i were to write i need to have a better background thanks!
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Post by Helba on May 2, 2010 2:37:08 GMT -4
and we'll need extra ideas incase vale and/or laila have trouble thinking up on how to progress the story.
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Post by Vale on May 2, 2010 9:54:22 GMT -4
sure thing laila, ill write when im not busy with papers. and i dont think me or laila will run out of ideas were more creative than crayons
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Post by Vale on May 15, 2010 10:43:32 GMT -4
Chapter 12
~Tenshu, Sa, Helba, Vrare, Sophitia and Laila~ The battleship containg the owl members and the team finally were docked in orin after hours of long travels, and fighting against the stormy wind and horrifying wave pounding against the ship, like a bully. It was still terental down pour on the shadow covered town. The Gernals yelled throughout the ship for the soldiers to report and get ready for the raid to begin. Tenshu, Sa, Helba, Vrare and Sophitia were all lined up to make sure all suspision was gone and got the owl to continue thinking they were one of them. The Commander gave a long speech about the fight they were getting into and remindng them what they are fighting for in a mysterious latin of a broken or foregotten language. The soldiers released the bridge leading out of the ship and all the foot soldiers came charging out and screaming "Rawrrrrrrr!!!!!" leaving the people of orin to scream and panic, running like confused chickens. The sacred members snuck away from the group and started their own search for Laila and Vale.
They ran all over the town of Orin pushing against the screaming crowds. But, lucky they found Laila, all alone with no Vale besides her or anywhere in site with her. Tenshu gave a mad look at laila and stamped his foot impatiently, They took off the hoods and all waited for Laila to explain, till tenshu made the first voice.
Tenshu: Laila -giving her a mad look- wheres my little sister? She is suppose to be with you. Laila: Well we were together but, then she met a nightmare from her past and ran off to Orin. And she ran faster then I could and lost site of her in the people and town.
Tenshu still gave her a mean look then just looked away from her out of distrust. Then without a word they all continued looking for Vale.
~Yagami~ Vales father look everywhere in town, he old favorite places of peace when she lived in Orin, but no sight of her around. So he continued on till he saw Laila and others and secretly started to follow them without a word. Because before Yagami was a world known Scientist, he was once an S-rank Hunter who known how to spy in the enemy.
~Vale~ The bullets rained still with a darkness blocking the bullets with no show of damage. When Vale looked up after looking away and the bullets finally stopped, there stood a female figure like Vales dressed the same way she was but had red for eyes, the edge of her dress and emblem. This was Vales dark side, that somehow manifested itself to save her. It had the voice of Vale.
Dark Vale: Do not ever say i did not do you any favors Vale.
Dark Vale lifted her hand and blasted the soldiers who were trying to shoot at Vale, only leaving Mr. X to stand alone. Then the dakeness disappeared falling to the ground into a puddle of shadows that crawled its way back to Vale vanishing.
To be continued....
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Post by Laila on May 19, 2010 10:47:02 GMT -4
it is time i got back into writing mode! I will take on Chapter 13 just e0mail me vale when chapter 12 if fully done
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Post by Laila on May 25, 2010 13:01:20 GMT -4
Well since the chapter 12 is done i would like to hear from people...what do you think would happen next? gemme ideas! next chapter i will go back in the voting phase
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Post by Laila on Jun 3, 2010 16:06:54 GMT -4
~ Chapter 13~
Rain was pouring hard in the town of Orin, it was very late deep in the night, even though Laila and company could not see very far they still ran in the town recklessly in trying to find vale. Wind was picking up and lightning would scatter the sky. Tenshu was growing more and more worried because he was separated from vale too long and too far from her he knew that her evil other side wanted to come out and he would make it feel to everyone on the team. Everyone was silent and in deep thinking, they all felt for sure that something bad was going to happen tonight. Sometimes they would encounter enemies but they would simply not be enough to be a match for the team. Laila had a feeling that they were being followed but it mattered not for the moment, then suddenly Tenshu took her arm and made her stop dead. He turned Laila around and with an angry face he said:
Tenshu: Where is Vale!? Do you know what will happen if we don’t find her quickly!? Huh!? Get your senses moving! I am very angry at you! I trusted you could protect her and as soon as you look away for a second she disappears!
Laila shook off her arm, she could simply not believe what Ten had said! She busted out in anger while others were standing away knowing not to get involved in it:
Laila: Angry!?...ANGRY!? Are you really angry at me Ten!? No I don’t know what will happen if that evil goes out…but I do know something. Right now I have protected her more than you did in the past few days… HOW?!? Because I followed her because I knew she would flee to protect YOU from being killed! Where were you when her father appeared before her eyes? How come you did not recognize her when she was captured by those guards? You are blaming ME for not protecting what should not happen? I would think again Ten.
She turned around and started to run searching for vale. Tears of sadness and anger would flow out on her cheeks but would be washed right away by the rain after a moment she would hear Ten calling out her name but she ran faster an tried to lose them. She stopped in the middle of a street thinking she had lost them trying to catch her breath. She was pounded down unexpectedly by someone while trying to fight back she heard:
Tenshu: Sorry!…Sorry...I was wrong about being mad…
Knowing it was Tenshu she said:
Laila: You know I am scared and worried too hm? And I forgive you dummy!
Rain was still pouring down on them; they gave each other a hug meaning that they were both forgiven. SA: Sorry Mr T. to destroy your romance moment but we’ve got some company…
Both Laila and Tenshu quickly got back up and they were surrounded by the enemies up to the sky. They knew that if they attempted something all of the team would be shot down. They were taken in custody and brought in the center of the town where Vale would be standing in front of a man. She had a dark aura floating around her and she seemed to be in deep pain trying to hold back something. The man saw the team arrived and while smiled greeted them.
Mr.X: Hello everyone sorry for my late introduction, I am satori Leader of the “grave of evil owl” clan I am honored to have your presence…Laila…Beautiful as you have ever been, you are truly a remarkable woman! Strong & courageous yet sweet and caring for others…I have missed you a lot ..
Laila: I will KILL you!
Satori: Now now…. Tenshu …strong man as ever…also I bet you are still bad tempered also… how have you been? Remember me? No…probably not… you came for your little sister? I am afraid I am not giving her back…infact you both and her will come with me… I have some unfinished business with you lot…oh and what about the rest of the team?
Tenshu: Put a finger on them and you will PAY for it! Now release Vale…
Satori: …hmmmmm….no!
Vale: Kyaaaaah!!!!! Brother!!!!!
Tenshu: VALE!!!
Satori: Kill them! all but those 3!
War broke out, They somehow all managed to free themselves from the men that were holding them, Sophitia was casting Jellens while helba casted zalure for more protection against the army, SA and Vrave were protecting the casters while Laila and Tenshu fought their way towards Vale.
Laila: Leave Satori to me…Go to vale.
Tenshu: You got it girl.
Laila: Okay guys…get outta my way….she said to the enemy before her.
She had hunters from all classes against her. Forces were casting all sorts of magic to her but she would always avoid them somehow, Bullets would fly off the sky while slicers and daggers would try to wound her. She casted a razonde trying to shock off hunters that were gathering around her to capture her a new but only managed to get a few. Overpowered by this army alone she called for some help from the others but they were too far away to hear her. Laila was fighting with all her might with her weapon and knowing she was surrounded by the enemy she saw Satori walking down on her with a weird katana with an evil aura around it…
Laila: Yamigarasu…Father’s Sword! Where the hell did you get that!?
Satori: oh! You don’t remember? Surprising…do you-
A big wave made everyone fall on the ground but the gravity was so heavy that no one could get back up… Laila managed to turn her head towards vale and what she saw was not very appealing. Everyone around vale was dead…or…burned rather by those who dared to approach her, only Tenshu would be standing up in front of her but he seemed weird…like something was shining from his forehead and he would be holding his swords in his hands. Due to the force of the gravity he would move slowly but surely towards Vale. When he was close enough to her he said:
Tenshu: Go back where you belong you filthy demon!!!!
*evil* Vale: I do not fear you! One day I will destroy you!
Tenshu: You wish! Now let’s put you back to sleep!
*evil* Vale: hissssssss…
Laila turned around to look at her friends but they were all unconscious. She crawled closer to them and tried to yell to wake them up with no luck the most she could do is to try to heal them as much possible but she was very weak. She managed to get up weakly even though her head was spinning and all the parts of her body were sore. She started to walk towards tenshu but to her horror she was not seeing him nor Vale, only darkness was surrounding them, it was huge an pitch black as if they were in another dimension. She suddenly felt hands grabbing her ankle just to see it were satori holding her up.
Satori: You are mine! You cannot escape your fate! I will become powerful and you my wife!
Laila: Keep on dreaming!
She kicked him in the face and took a nearby saber and she stabbed him in the stomach.
Laila: Die in pain! Oh and I will take back father’s sword.
She took yamigarasu in her hands and everything went blank, she was confused and wobbling around. Another huge explosion made her fall on the ground because of the wave that it caused. Bright light came out of it and before she lost consciousness she remembered a bright warm light shining and she could see Tenshu holding his little sister in his arms, then she fell into slumber. They did not know that what just happened was still being observed by a certain someone. He laughed, turned around and left.
*drip drip drip drip*
Laila was coming back from her unconsciousness; the floor was hard and cold but the air was fresh and cooling. She would feel someone’s breath over her and a cold, wet cloth was then being put on her forehead, she then felt warm hands touching her and started to heal her bruises on her body. She could feel the sharp pain from her deepest wound being healed and finally disappear. She slowly opened her eyes to see that Helba was kneeled beside her. She trie to speak but nothing came out of her voice.
Helba: Don’t move! You got hit on the head pretty hard you need more rest.
Laila: Where are we?
Helba: Some sort of caves… if you are wondering if the others are okay they are okay? Sophitia is taking care of Tenshu…he is very wounded…
Laila: And Vale?
Helba: She’s all right… She is sleeping but not wounded.
They spent the next days resting and healing each other. When laila was strong enough to walk again, she made sure that S.A had no technical problem with his gear and she also made a check-up of all the weapons they were carrying. She also made sure that her new katana was well hidden in cloth and made sure she had no contact with it. Vale woke up a few days later to the relief of everyone; she seemed to be fine though she did not remember what happened a few days before. She ate and drank and got back on her feet very quickly and a day or so later the team was back on exploring the cave. The first thing that they noticed was the doors were still functioning correctly and there was traps scattered all over. The walls were green and there was a source of light coming from above but it was not the sun, it looked like it but it was not. The ground felt mellow under their feet and they would sometimes encounter some computer in the area. Large puddle of crystal clear water was also found as well as monsters around it. They came across a huge door with a portal activated inside it.
S.A: Looks like a dead end…
Vrave: Maybe this is our way out…
S.A: Or maybe not…we should explore some more…I have seen weird things in here…
Helba: What should we do?
Sophitia: I don’t know but I do not have a good feeling about this…
DUNDUNDUN! 4pages of story! I hope I made up for some time loss! It took me 3days to write it (yes 3 days) for a grand total of 1700 words! Woohoo! Now what should the team do!?: 1) Take the portal!? 2) Explore the caves some more? 3) Gah! Fuck it! Go back home…
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Post by SA Android Series on Jun 3, 2010 18:19:58 GMT -4
My personal quirks are influencing my decision, but i choose number 2, exploring could lead to treasure! ...or better yet, some answers!
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Post by Vale on Jun 3, 2010 20:52:36 GMT -4
agreed with Sa option 2
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Post by Laila on Jul 21, 2010 9:03:12 GMT -4
jeez its been a month already!? oh my! i am sooo sorry guys! summer was taking a toll on me! chapter 14 IS here!!!
~ Chatper 14 ~
~~Winner: Explore the caves more.~~
*foots steps* *drip...drip...drip...*
Sophitia: This place is amazingly beautiful...i still wonder how we came into this cave.
Vrave: Everyone was unconscious but i do get the feeling someone helped us...
S.A: The weirdest thing it that this cave is man made.. .look on the walls...the way the caves are shaped it cannot be natural..they did a good job but not enough. There is a lot of machinery here...look i think if we go that way we could find an elevator somewhere.
They walked through a long corridor leading them to some strange places where clear water would flow and some unknown plants would be growing. Some nano dragons would be flying over their heads and other creatures such as weird white flowers that would try to eat or poison people when they would get too close would be quietly standing up. Once they arrived at the destination point where S.A was telling the team, they found an elevator behind the mechanic doors that was still functional they took it to go to the upper level of the area only to find a more soaking wet cave but this time the walls were blue. They walked around and ,suddenly, something flashed from under the foot of helba. They all jumped out fearing it was a trap, but instead they found this hologram that started speaking with the voice of the famous disappeared Rico.
“I wonder why my father told me to come here! This place is soaking wet!!! Plus I have tons of body guards…why? I can defend myself! I have all this kind of restrictions and a special diet..i feel dizzy all the times and my senses are not as good as it used to be…what is going on…I hear a lot of screaming…this place hides something hideous… something wrong… the place is beautiful but full of traps! I wonder if there is some kind of experiment going on here…I have scattered recorders all over the caves....i will get to the bottom of this…”
Everyone looked at each other with a surprised look. Rico was here? Why? They decided to split in small teams searching for more recorders hidden and they promised that they would meet back at this point. But when Sophitia and Vrave were running late they started to worry but just as they were about to go and search for them, they heard Sophitia yelling;
Sophitia: HEY GUYS!!! COM THIS WAY! I think we have made some discovery!
Vrave: There is a blocked door we need some mechanics here we were not able to open it…ti seems…it is a top-secret room…
Tenshu: Well what are we waiting for? Let’s go! They walked to the destination guided by Vrave. The door was huge and well protected they passed a few hours trying to break the code but with no success. Rage was building up in the team until…
“Passwor correct, Please enter. Welcome to the FALZ project.”
Vrave: who did what?
S.A: I smashed the board. Everyone: *sigh*
S.A: What?
Tenshu: never mind…let’s go…
They walked in a huge room with lots of machinery and a lot of organic modified plants and animals that were living in there. There was a small door at the other side of the room with a sing “Do not enter. Specialist only” and, obviously, went behind the doors being very careful and what they saw next blew them away. There was a huge pillar with 4circles on it and it seemed that it had the logo of when they would do a photon blast. It had huge wires coming from the bottom and it seemed semi-organic. They moved carefully closer to the pillar.
Laila: Woah…
Vale: What is that?
Vrave: What does this means?
Sophitia: Why does it have our PB logo?
S.A: Can we touch it?
Tenshu: Nooooooooooooo…!
Helba: Look…I found a recorder…listen up
“Id never imagined they would do this! Experiments on animals!? Poor creatures! And this pillar…FALZ project…this is the key to the ruins….one is up…I don’t know how to activate this one…but I have to hurry out of here! Th….eem…..be……..wor….of…lan….gra…..il…o…………………………”
Helba: It’s over…
Tenshu: Well logically….it has the logo of our photon blasts…why don’t we try to pour some energy…
S.A: Does that mean we can touch it? Tenshu: Oh will you stop? YEAH! You can!
S.A ran back to the pillar and touched it. One of the logos started to glow along with another one already lit. The room suddenly became red and an alarm went off;
“Code red,Intruders,Code Red…Pillar No2 has been activated. I repeat…”
Tenshu: Let’s get out of here quick!
They ran out but took the wrong corner somewhere on the road. They came into an unknown small round room and they could hear that the floor had a weird sound… Lights went off and the door closed tight shut. Then a trap door opened up…right under their feet! They all fell down in the pitch black not knowing where or how they will land…luckily a water pond was under them and everyone was able to swim back up..
Sophitia: Everyone alive!?
Vale: Yeah…one hell of a shock!
Vrave: im ok..
S.A: whee big luck I am waterproof..
Tenshu: you have been waterproof for awhile now…platform over there c’mon..Helba?
Helba: I am faster than you!
~Later~
S.A: What do we do…there is a panel…and we are on a platform…it stinks and we MIGHT have some enemies up there that wants us…well dead…what’s next? A huge worm attacking us? I say we try to activate that panel see what it does.
Helba: Maybe but there is another one….on the other side of it…
Vale: One is blue the other red…which one?
INDEED! WHICH ONE! 1) Red panel 2) Blue panel 3) Do hara-kiri and die!
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