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Post by Laila on Mar 19, 2010 8:34:34 GMT -4
That is some GReat Ideas guys! im proud of you! On a side note... Vale and Laila are in orin... Tenshu and the others are in the other town so there is like...more than half a day that seperates them and that is by like carrige or ships(ships might be faster tho) and over a day by walk so yeah...i guess they could see some light but the could not go to investigate...but you still gave great ideas! we will work with them
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Post by SA Android Series on Mar 19, 2010 18:45:53 GMT -4
Oh, i didn't mean go to investigate, i meant, run like heck away from it. =P
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Post by Vale on Mar 21, 2010 10:34:07 GMT -4
am i writing the next chapter?
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Post by Laila on Mar 22, 2010 10:38:02 GMT -4
Yes yes Go ahead did i fill you in with the info? i think so eh? anyways just send me what you plan on doing for the next chapters oh and guys.. Did i tell you not to trust anyone? that woman was evil muahahahahahah!!!! id tought there should be more such things otherwise its too easy for our heroes
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Post by Vale on Mar 27, 2010 14:23:56 GMT -4
- i will be using some of SA's ideas for this i guess and maybe use other bits and pieces from others ideas. - and use details i learned from tenshu, when i asked about things that would happen. -so enjoy!
Chapter 10: ~tenshu, sa, helba, vrave and sophitia~ Everything was dark and heavy rain poured as if the heavens were crying at the site. The roaring of the fire and cracking could be heard still slowly murdering the house. Tenshu, vrave, helba and Sa were on the earth unconsious from escaping the masion but getting caught enough to sent them flying to the ground. Tenshu slowly starts waking up from escaping an eternal slumber but finds his head bleeding from impact.
-Tenshu: that blast was bigger than i thought....better go find and wake the others before others come....
We slowly got up and stumbled and limped at times to search for his friends. He found Sa missing an arm and leg but was on the ground besides him, vrave was in a tree on a branch and helba was already awake. But, they couldnt find sophitia anywhere outside then looks in shock and ran to the masions, slowly becoming ashes and falling apart.
-All: Sophitia!
they ran into the living room avoiding falling boards and collapsing floors. And found sophitia on the ground with a fallen board on her legs. Sa ran and grabbed sophitia and they escaped before the building finally gave in and crushed everything. Helba healed sophitia from wounds she sistand and tenshu put back on Sa's leg and arm correctly.
But then they heard heavy foot steps in and distance and shouting.
-owl soldiers: i heard it from over here hurry!
-Tenshu: crap, we have to hurry out of here before they find us. Sa carry sophitia till she awakes. -Sa: roger. -Tenshu: lets hurry and get out!
they ran the opposite direction of the soldeirs approaching, and ran back to the town. THey gathered up their belongings at the inn and continued running enought that they lost the enemy. But now they just had to find a way to get to orin fast.
-vrave: wait remember that owl grave had a ship going to orin?
-tenshu: yea what about it?
-vrave: we lore some of their soldiers to one of us, then knock them out and use their cloths and accessories to disguise ourselfs.
-helba: and they are going to orin remember?
-tenshu: alright the plan is settled sa you stay and try to wake sophitia, while we get the cloths.
-sa: yes sir.
Tenshu, helba and vrave split up to get disguise from the enemies. Tenshu got his set with an earing pieceings of an owl, sa got a cloaks while helba distacted the soldiers they needed.
~ Laila and Yagami~ -Laila: nothing better happen to her, my leader will be pissed if she got hurt or worst.
-yagami: i know, i wouldn't be the best father for letting her hurt again and repeat history.
-laila: what happpened to her all those years ago anyways? its like she fears this place...
-yagami: she actually loves this place when she was little, before orin became dark and gloomy as it is now. but you see all those years ago she set orin ablaze. All those grave happened because of her.
-Laila: what?! she cant possibly do all that damage by herself!
-yagami: well believe it. but she wasnt herself, she has a "curse" as I like to refer to it. You see shes not like everyone else technically. Shes full of pure evil from a "god" that i didnt know of till her first day of starting high school.
-Laila: wait.. shes like 10 how can she goto highschool?
-yagami: shes actually 16, but she was born on a leap year. and she was quite the genius back then, hehe just like her old man. I was a scientist at the time. best known on regol and pinoneer 1 and 2.
-laila: so what happened all those years ago?
-yagami: well she lost control of the thing inside her and acted souless while destroying orin. i remember the site of those dark-purple souless eyes.. they used to be a cute light purple...
-laila: but she seemed fine when i first met her.
-yagami: well shes branched from anothers evil essence thats all i know.
-laila: i see... now enough chat lets hurry, shes probaly in orin by now.
They hurried to orin to try and find Vale before others do and before she almost looses it again.
~Vale~ Vale wondered around orin. after she ran from her father and laila in fear. As she woundered though orin her head started to hurt and her vision started to become blurry and distorted. But then she kept hearing an old voice calling her name and laughing.
-unknown voice: hahaha vale you finally want to return to me? hahaha... come back to me, you belong to me...
-vale: NO! go away!
Vale continued walking dazzed and confused. trying to escape the voice and yagami. bumping into townspeople and sometimes tripping over her feet. Until she bumped and fell onher butt and looked up to see what she hit.
Mr. X: well well ive finally found you Vale I. Yuusha. Your quite the hunt.
to be continued....
same drill as the last chapter think of those ideas.
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Post by SA Android Series on Mar 29, 2010 13:00:14 GMT -4
The plot thickens... dun dun dun.
anywhoo... i like it. Though i can't think of any ideas for the next one atm, as I'm a little busy.
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Post by Laila on Mar 29, 2010 14:29:23 GMT -4
ooo nice plot Anyhow can you please write the next chapter? i will be busy starting a new job so i wont have time next week :s infact i dont know when ill have time...
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Post by Vale on Mar 29, 2010 17:26:55 GMT -4
sure can do miss laila. just gotta wait for some ideas.
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Post by Helba on Apr 17, 2010 9:22:20 GMT -4
we're suffering from a shortage of ideas,we need ideas on how this story shall progress.
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Post by Vale on Apr 17, 2010 15:28:20 GMT -4
since theres been a lack of ideas for this chapter, im gonna do what i should've done long time ago. im using my own idea since i had it planned a long time ago. story rebellion! Chapter 11: (finally...)
~Tenshu, Sa, Helba, Vrare and Sophitia~ Everyone went back to Sa and the wakened Sophitia to get their gear together and put there disguises on to hide from and amongst the enemies. They headed to the docking area of the town of Etherna, where the owl clan members started loading up its soldiers handing them weapons for a raid when they reach their destination. They asked a soldier where they were heading, and the soldier simply replied Orin. Everyone got onboard after the wait, getting slowly verified to see if they were members of the clan and not imposters. They all were confirmed to be the real thing but the soldiers still kept suspision. They were sent into a cabin where they could rest and laugh about the people they are attacking and strategies to keep themselves alive. Tenshu, Sa, Vrave, Helba and Sophitia were all set in the same cabin together.
Tenshu: One step closer to finding Vale and Laila and hopefully this is a quick ride. We have to make up for lost time. Sa: Don't worry Tenshu we'll get to them before these soldiers do. Vrave: Right we can find them faster, i mean Vale probaly missed you sire so im sure she charge at you first rather than these punks. Sophitia: and lailas with her so nothing bad can happen to her.
Then they over hear a soldier talking to a general telling him news about Orin. Soldier: Sir, i have news about Master Saya over his current location in the town of Orin. General: What is it soldier report it now! Soldier: Yes sir! Master Saya has found the little girl wondering alone around Orin. Hes attempting to capture her without fail unlike the last group who encountered her.
The team looked at eachother shocked from the news. Hoping they can still get to Vale before Saya is able to capture her.
~Laila and Yagami~ Laila and Yagami finally got to the town of Orin instead of the outskirts, with the heavens crying harder than it was before. Then ran into the town trying to see through the crowds of people and trying to get through to get to Vale before anyone else does. Sometimes they had to push their way through will still keeping an eye on eachother so they would get lost from eachother. Yagami:please be safe Vale... Laila: Comeon where are you Vale. I cant lose you on Tenshu...
They continued through the crowd wondering and searching, coming up with nothing in site so far only more wave of people coming. Suddenly Yagami and Laila lost sight from eachother in the crowd and ended up in different parts of Orin, only leading further away from Vale or maybe a step closer. But who will find Vale and save her in time is the real problem.
~Vale~ Vale chould hardly focus on what was infront of her. She was trying to keep the voice in her head from taking over her, and not revert to a souless beast. She still stared at Mr. X with only her purple eyes glowing from the darkness of her face, waiting for something to happen. Until the soldiers following Mr. X had Vale at gun point, waiting for their master to make a move.
Mr. X:Your quiet the little hunt, but your worth it, you'll bring the other two to me quicker than i can find them. Now come with me peacefully and my men wont have to use force to get you to come. Vale:No just please leave me alone, i have something more important to run away from unlike a pitiful human like you... Voice: Hahahaha yes my little creation let me back in. Then Vale bursted out in anger to the voice in her head.
Vale:Shut up! your dead so go away! im not your little puppet anymore!
Mr. X and his soldiers looked at her as if she was insane. But Mr. X just smiled like he was waiting just to make sure he had the right tareget to make this dreams a reality. Mr. X hahahaha perfect. Now lets say you come with me Vale I. Yuusha, it will be easier for the both of us.
Mr. X tried to grab Vale but she moves out of the way and slaps his hand away and looked up at him angerly. Vale:Don't touch me!
Mr.X tries to get a hold on Vale but she keeps moving so it makes it impossible. Until Mr. X got angry enough to summon his troops to open fire and take her by force instead of the polite way. Vale summoned a sheild of deband, but couldn't focus to keep it strong enough. Bullets started to rain at Vale. But just before the bullets could hit a person moved infront of her to take the bullets and protect Vale.
to be continued....
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