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Post by SA Android Series on Jan 25, 2010 8:20:58 GMT -4
That's interesting, I can wait to see how you mold all of that into a story.
Welcome back, Helba... and good luck.
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Post by Helba on Jan 26, 2010 1:50:39 GMT -4
yikes,now it's gotten to the point where i can't afford to mess this up.
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Post by SA Android Series on Jan 26, 2010 20:46:48 GMT -4
Hmm? it's ok to mess up, i had some messups in my post when i first posted it. Sure, i fixed them, but i'm sure there are more skulking around in there.
Just relax, get comfortable, and type/write your heart out.
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Post by Helba on Feb 1, 2010 7:20:50 GMT -4
well,here goes nothing.
Helba:there are times where i question who i am,who i am not,times when i doubt my identity as a newman.I wasn't always like this,i used to be normal,until 5 years ago. i awoke in a strange lab,dangerous experiments were being conducted,i can still remember strangely dressed people carrying the corpses of failed experiments to be disposed of,countless months passed,countless times i was experimented on.i just wanted it to end,the unbearable agony,until....
one day,i awoke to the sound of gunfire,to the screams of people as they were callously and brutally executed,i could hear footsteps, echoing through the corridors,getting closer,and closer,terrified,i hid,hoping that i would not be next.then,unable to take it anymore,i panicked and tried to make a run for it,i just wanted out of this place. i could still hear shouting and gunfire,the next thing i knew,i was in a large room, so many people dead,"this can't be happening" i said in disbelief,suddenly i heard someone behind me,a soldier who had his gun pointed right at me,unable to think,i continued running.the soldier fired a few shots,one of them got me in the shoulder,i was bleeding but i couldn't afford to stop running.after what felt like forever,i finally made it to the main entrance,my path however was blocked as a dozens soldier had intercepted me.unable to run any further,i resigned myself as the soldiers opened fire,but before the killing shot,something happened,i briefly blacked out.when i came to,all i could see,were the corpses of the soldiers that had blocked my path,"w-what.....have i done?" i said weakly as i fell to my knees,i looked down to find my hands were stained with their blood.i was frightened.
at that point,all i could do was continue running,i do not know how far or how long i was running for.i soon collapsed due to my injuries,i couldn't go on. when i woke up,i found myself in the hospital,after looking around,i asked a nearby nurse,it was then i had learned that some hunters found me and that i had been asleep for nearly a month.she was also surprised that i was still alive after the injuries i had suffered. i spent the next week recovering,when asked if i had any family,i replied that i had none,that my parents died a few years ago.after i left the hospital,i wandered for close to a week,eventually my path crossed with a small group of people.one of them recognised me and introduced herself,her name was kodachi,a newman who works for the hunters guild,after some talking,kodachi asked me what i'd been up to.i replied that i had been searching for a purpose,it was then that i was asked if i had considered signing up.i answered that i had never really thought about it,i was then asked to think on it for a bit,i spent the next few days contemplating whether or not i should join the hunters guild,eventually i had made up my mind.i met with kodachi again,i told her i would sign up to the hunters guild.
kodachi commented that i looked like i would do pretty well in using techniques and should work as a force(more to come as soon as i can think it up)
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Post by Laila on Mar 17, 2010 14:46:48 GMT -4
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Post by SA Android Series on Mar 17, 2010 18:12:35 GMT -4
I like it, Helba, (you'll have to excuse the late reply, i had neglected to check on this thread for a time.) even though I'm not too found with the first person point of view, but i still find your story enjoyable.
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Post by Helba on Mar 17, 2010 20:17:26 GMT -4
thanks guys,to tell the truth,that was my first time writing a story and i wasn't sure it was going to work out.still working on it though i have trouble on how to proceed from there.
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Post by SA Android Series on Mar 17, 2010 20:32:04 GMT -4
Hrmm, you could cover how you joined team sacred?
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Post by Helba on Mar 18, 2010 5:07:59 GMT -4
yeah,i could do that,just gotta work out how helba joins sacred.
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