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Post by Helba on Dec 19, 2009 22:13:06 GMT -4
if you really enjoy something,then that's all that's important.
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Post by Laila on Dec 19, 2009 23:49:53 GMT -4
I appreciate it, i like reading about my character doing things without putting much effort into doing so... lol.. I'm also trying to get some Background on Unit 495, which is what i'll be calling my main from now on. Woah what a big background...well i guess ill read it on monday Moving on thanks for the tips, at least 3people is enough to go on :3
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Post by SA Android Series on Dec 20, 2009 0:25:59 GMT -4
Yeah, i spent some time on it. Though i think all the aesthetics make it look bigger.
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Post by HeartBreak301 on Dec 20, 2009 1:17:39 GMT -4
I put Hex's background into SA's topic, look over there if you want to see it.
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Post by SA Android Series on Dec 20, 2009 15:43:28 GMT -4
Right, let's get back on topic. Who's writing the next part?
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Post by Vale on Dec 24, 2009 14:37:38 GMT -4
I guess ill write it i am better at writing these than back storys. winning vote:1) Follow Tenshu’s order and run for it? 2) Ignore the order and help tenshu fight? 3) Grab Tenshu and run for it (yes all three it was me and lailas idea to try and get all three involved)
chapter 5 The group of men all had their guns pointing at tenshu and party and waiting for an action from their targets. Vale was holding on to tenshus arm not wanting to leave him behind to die cause hes the only family she has. And the others were prpared to make a quick move for a quick mistake with no damage done and keep eveyone safe. Tenshu kept whispering the same order...
Tenshu: come on go follow orders, as leader you have to obey no matter the costs. Vale you have to be a good girl Laila and eveyone will take care of you.
Vale:but...
Then SA grabbed vale by the waist and held her to his side and laila throws down a smoke gernade so they can make a stealthy escape so they wouldn't get hurt while tenshu either surrenders or fight. SA and Laila are running foreward and not looking back to see what might become of their leader. Vale was trying to squirm out of SA's grip but she couldn't get loose.
Vale: NO NO NO! we have to go back and get big brother! -tries to break free-
SA: sorry vale well be going against tenshus command if i let you go back and you get hurt or worst.
Laila: We're ordered to escape and keep you safe. No matter the cost.
Vale: But we cant leave him we need to go back for him not leave him to die... please i have a plan that can work.
SA: -drops Vale- alright what is it Vale?
Vale: Me and Laila will create a distraction while you get tenshu run to somewhere safe where me and laila will meet once we are done and escape.
Mean while back at the site where the tenshu got seperated from his friend to protect them from these men who dared threatened their lives. Tenshu pulled out his Onikiri to prepare himself for an epic battle of life or death. The men started firing their guns and some charged at him with dundrels at the side ready to shank. Tenshu blocked and was able to take out some of the footmen and the gunners but we was still out numbered. And a soldier with a Rianov 303SNR shot onikiri out of his hand. Which left tenshu to surrender since he lost his weapon and he was out of magic. So tenshu put his hands up for surrender and give in and except his punishment.
Just then a almost comet sized fireball smashed into some of the soldiers and Laila came from the dust and started slashing at the men so Tenshu can make an escape while Vale stood bakc and hit them with her battle verge when they came to close and megid them for an instant kill. Laila used her soul eater weapon since it will hit more of the people to take out more than one at a time. SA grabbed Tenshu and led him out while Vale and Laila continued fighting to stop the men from proceeding toward Tenshu.
After Laila and Vale stood surrounded by a river of blood and a ground a corpses from all the people they took lives from that wanted to hurt tenshu.
Laila: That was a good excerising. But now were probaly wanted criminals since we took all of these men and some escaped so there bond to find out what happened on this ground.
Vale: But Laila if thats true can we still return to Tenshu and SA we'll be wanted more than tenshu maybe so is it safe to return to them?
TO BE CONTINUED.....
Voting: 1) return to tenshu and sa with tenshus sword and foreget what they have done and hopefully dont see a backlash.
2)return to tenshu but then slip off on their own so they dont get them hurt cause they got posters and probaly government after them.
3) dont return to them at all and set off and get masks and a new look so they can hid from their posters and from tenshu and sa.
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Post by SA Android Series on Dec 24, 2009 20:22:38 GMT -4
Hrmm.. I want to say option one, but my want for a twist leans towards option two or three.
Bah... i guess option two.
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Post by Vale on Jan 20, 2010 9:01:55 GMT -4
Winning Vote(s) 2)return to tenshu but then slip off on their own so they dont get them hurt cause they got posters and probaly government after them.
3) dont return to them at all and set off and get masks and a new look so they can hid from their posters and from tenshu and sa.
Chapter 6
Vale and Laila went to the destination where SA and Tenshu would be waiting after the plan was a success. Vale and Lailia were discussing on the way on what they should do and kept walking and thinking.
Vale: so Lailia were running away from them right? what if they come look for us and they get into danger?
Laila: well vale we'll use the power of disguise im pretty sure a town near us will have masks and cloaks, but we'll need different cloths and hair styles it be easy to get spotted. SA has sharp eyes. *giggles* he cant even find waldo in a milla-second.
Vale: okay Laila but since it will just be us we'll have to keep a watchful eye for the government and the "grave evil owls" members lerking about in the shadows.
SA saw Laila and Vale walking in the distance and Helba noticed but was busy tending to Tenshu's wounds. When Helba was finished Tenshu and Vale hugs and cuddle eachother to show how much they were worried about eachother. Vale returned her brothers Onikiri and hugged him again. they continued till they reached a town called Diaora that had an inn and all the things Vale and Laila needed for their plan. When they got to their room they got 2 rooms, one for the girls and one for the boys. Vale and Laila said they were going shopping in Diaora and wont be back till late into the night.
Vale and Laila got masks from a mask store which was all white and had a red swirl on one eye. Vales was on the left and Lailas was on the right of their masks. Also where they got white cloaks with hoods, they got new outfits (ill draw them and take pictures to show you how they look). Then finally they got their hair cut Vales was now pass her shoulders to the tip of her ears with side bangs covering one eye and Laila got a ponytail that was spiked up and was clipped into a bun with her hair covering it.
Lailia: well vale heres the new us. Were now running from the law and running from our own friends. We cant turn back now, nor can we look back at the past.
Vale: are you sure we cant say good-bye to everyone? i wont wanna leave tenshu again.. im important to him.
Laila: well we will be indangering them all but we'll leave a note for them okay?
Vale: fine.... -gives Lailia her hair ribbon- just leave tenshu that for me okay?
Laila: Alright Vale just wait here for my return put your cloak on and wear your mask its dangerous during a silent night like this.
Laila run back to the inn and quickly wrote a note to Tenshu, SA and Helba silently and left Vales ribon attach to the note like she asked. And also silently creeped to her room to grab Vale and her weapon so they can defend themselves if they encounter the enemies. Lailia returned to Vale without a noise and the run off in the dusk of the night leaving all they cared about behind.
To be continued.... Voting time!
1) when Tenshu, SA and Helba see the note panic
2) think about why they would leave and start looking for them
3) continue running for themselves. ps: Vale and Laila when they are encountered again learn ninja moves and stealth ect.
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Post by SA Android Series on Jan 20, 2010 17:52:29 GMT -4
Option two, Definitely.
That was interesting, Vale, I didn't expect you to use both two and three.
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Post by Vale on Jan 20, 2010 18:26:25 GMT -4
well im a women of many suprises SA ^ ^
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